This is a Flash Fiction short story I wrote for my fiction writing class. Since it's flash fiction, it's supposed to be really short. Our word cap was 450 words. And, this was the first time I tried my hand at writing something so short, so I hope it works.
Enjoy!
Smile!
Photography seems to be all that I'm good at. I've had a
camera strap around my neck since I was nine and going out into the woods with
my dad. Animals and landscapes always were his thing. My favorite subjects are
people, especially children. They're so unique and innocent it's hard not to
love them.
But this girl, Ms. Halle Hackey, is a completely different story. The
four-year-old won’t stand still. She just wants to roll around in the grass. I
even tried bribing her with a sucker. She ate the sucker, threw the stick down,
and kept rolling.
I glance to my left. Mrs. Hackey is
glaring at me.
“I’m not paying you to take
pictures of my grass,” she says. “Or to rot Halle’s teeth. Get me a good
picture, and I’ll get you your money.” Apparently, her usual photographer was
suddenly sick and she needed someone to cover for him. I don't know if I'll be
able to make her happy. She’s one of those strict businesswomen that need
everything just right. Especially pictures of their children.
I turn back to Halle. “Hey, Halle,
remember that balloon animal I promised you if you were good?” I ask, and her
ears perk up. She stands.
“Ok, Halle. Could you smile for a
second?”
She flashes a pretty smile, then
switches to one of those smirks kids are great at. I snap a few photos. It's
better than grass.
“Where’s my balloon?”
"I need a pretty smile first,
please, Halle." I demonstrate with a grin of my own.
She flops back down and copies her
mother’s glare.
“Look, Halle,” I say. “A
distraction!”
Halle spins around on her bottom,
looking for it. “Where is it? I can’t see it!”
The shutter on my camera clicks
repeatedly. I’m trying not to laugh. Even Mrs. Hackey cracked a smile. I
honestly didn’t think that would work. I'll have to try it again sometime.
Halle's getting impatient. “Where
is it?”
A convenient butterfly flits by. I
point to it. “Right there.”
Halle calms down and smirks at me.
“That’s not a distraction. That’s a butterfly.”
“Oh,” I say.
Her interest now caught by the
butterfly, Halle sticks out her finger. The insect settles on it. It must have
been attracted to the sugar left over from her sucker.
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